Thats It?
I mean the beat was nice and all but no melody? You should really add some trancy melody in there and then it would sound great. What I would do is put the beats in the begining like for 30s and then start adding a good melody that goes with the beat.
Other then that its pretty good.
Also I don't see the point of Copyrighting the music since your basiclly sharing you music here.
But anyways keep up the good work!